First plot draft

Genre  - Horror

target audiance-16-20


The wests

The film starts with a boy in his car around the age of 17 and his name is tom. He is beeping the horn to what seems to be his girlfriend’s house that also appears to be around the age of 17 her name is Jane. He has a quiet song on the radio and he appears to be tired, so starts to fall asleep. You are then brought to his dream were there appears to be a man digging, the boy is then met by a lady behind him who grabs his throat and slice it with a knife. Jane knocks on the windows as the boy didn’t respond she opens the door and pushes him up were she sees, the slice in the boy’s throat. (She then appears to scream)

Jane is at her breakfast miserable and broken hearted. Within her outer view there appears to be a news report telling you about the west’s who were found to be missing after reportedly been given not guilty in there trail. Jane appears to be in her classroom tired and starts to drift off to sleep. She is then confronted by a man digging and women who has a knife in her hand. She tells Jane that they are called the wests and she tries to slice her throat. Jane puts her hand in front of the knife and wakes by the school bell. She drowns the bell out by her own scream frightening her classroom. As she grabs her books she notices her hand hurting in which there appears to be a bad cut...

Jane is in her bead unwilling to sleep too frightened by her dream, and the death of her boyfriend. She then researches the names of the wests on the internet and the discovering something shocking. In which the wests were accused of killing teenagers from the abergavennny area. The teens were reportedly due to have cut marks across there necks and were buried in a cemetery. She then falls asleep within her dream she appears to be in the outside of abergavenny  and there appears to be a group of people surrounding a man and women were a man goes behind both the people and with a nice and before slicing the throat the women says the words. I will have revenge and I will kill not you but you’re children.

Jane is awoken by the sound of music playing on her computer. She then hears screams from another bedroom were she looks on to see her sister with a slash across her throat...

A day later sat in the house on tired due to lack of a and subsequently falls asleep doing to she awakes in the cemetery confronted by the man and the women but she pushes the women out of the way and grabs her knife .She then stabs the man she then and turns her attention to the women she stabs her in the chest. She then awakes subsequently by her self covered in blood.

A week goes by and she has had no dream and there has been no reported case of teens being killed in their sleep. As she awakes from the night before she washes her face and on the right side of her she seas a figure, looming again the figure disappears she suddenly dries her face and looks up in the mirror were she suddenly sees the women behind her in the reflection with a knife to her throat screaming and then it ends there ……………….